tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6270079226181883536.post1673047260518182526..comments2011-08-04T17:53:37.634-07:00Comments on Creating Stuff Because.: The Puppethead War #10: With HasteMitchell R. Akhursthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03315777805666336784noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6270079226181883536.post-20399295849905601112011-07-27T06:05:26.878-07:002011-07-27T06:05:26.878-07:00Hey, Mitch.
I'm enoying Puppethead Saga and t...Hey, Mitch.<br /><br />I'm enoying Puppethead Saga and the setting.<br />Yet, I'll not tarry on praise today.<br /><br />I think you are assuming that readers remember everything.<br />The Saga is a conspiracy-action adventure set in a fantasy epic. That is a lot.<br />But, then there are the organisations, groups, rivals, enemies, allegiances etc.<br />What I'd like to see are reminders to us readers (it could be recaps at the start of episodes) of what is important to that episode from previous episodes.<br /><br />I think descriptions of places and organisations can be expanded on in the episodes as they are good but seem edited down;<br />My advice is to forget the word limit and let each episode run to its natural length.<br /><br />Hope this is useful.<br /><br />QuangoBaud (in Darth Advicious Mode)quango-baudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15930402941649752194noreply@blogger.com